Expanding Word Count

Now, many people ask this question, wondering how some people can write 90,000 words in a book and such and, well, here is my advice to you.

  1. Show – Don’t Tell: When you’re writing, make sure that you’re showing everything to your readers and not just telling them. Saying “Amelia was angry” isn’t exactly showing your readers what’s going on with your character. While your readers are getting what you mean, there is another way to say it. “Amelia’s face became red and her eyes narrowed at the woman who insulted her. With her fists clenched, she held back her retort.” That alone turns three words into twenty-three.
  2. Describe Details: When your character is in a room, describe the room. Describe the weather when appropriate to show how much time has passed. Maybe it was raining in one scene and in the next, maybe you want to say that the pavement is slick and wet and the sky was still riddled with clouds that are overhead. Maybe the room your character is in makes her feel claustrophobic. DESCRIBE IT! You can get away with describing anything, painting the pictures in your reader’s mind.
  3. Include Dialogue: I guess the best way to explain this would be to show an example, but in between dialogue, you could show what else your character is doing because we don’t just sit there while talking, we fidget around, make subtle movements, use your hands, show facial expressions.

“Come on!” Amelia shouted as she waved towards David. The sky overhead cried as there was a light mist falling from the light gray clouds overhead.

“I can’t keep up!” Behind her, Daniel was struggling to keep up with her, running out of breath and slowing down. “Slow down.”

When Amelia paused, she shook her head and turned around, nearly out of breath herself. She bent her knees and placed her hands on them, hoping to be able to fully breathe by the time her boyfriend caught up. Once he got there, he reached out his hand to her.

“Are you ready?” he questioned as he raised his eyebrows, the smile spread over his lips gently.

 


All of this can come into play when expanding your word count and I’m sure there are other ways, but these are the ones that I try to use frequently. Hopefully they help and I will continue to make new posts if I find other ways!

 

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2 thoughts on “Expanding Word Count

  1. I have been finding in my work lately that I leave out a lot of details when I write a first draft. While most people end up cutting a ton of work from a first draft as they edit, I end up adding a ton because I add more/better descriptions and change wording so that I do more showing and less telling.

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